Something's been bugging me about ROAD, and I just figured it out. My main character is too damn reactive, and not active.
And, of course, I have no idea how to fix it.
So Loving Husband and I are going to sit down with a glass (or two) of wine and brainstorm.
BAD NEWS: I may have to lose the song lyrics and references I use in HELL'S BELLES.
GOOD NEWS: My initial advance installment arrived today. Money, money, money!
BAD NEWS: Crap, I really have to finish my damn 2005 taxes.
GOOD NEWS: Er...where's that wine?