Started chapter seven. Thanks to everyone for their ideas!
Basically, Daun and I had a little talk. And we came to an agreement. He agreed to tell me how to write the story, and I agreed to do whatever the hell he wanted. It went something like this:
ME: Daun, really, no one CARES how you wind up getting to Virginia's house. We're up to page 102 already. Let's get on with it.
DAUN: Listen, you may be my Creator, but I'm in charge. This is my story, sweetheart. We're telling it my way. And I'm telling you, I want the reader to see me possess the poor slob on the street and get a free ride to the Department of Motor Vehicles, and then see me possess the disgruntled worker there to get Virginia's info from the computer and another free ride to Virginia's house.
ME: No one cares about that.
DAUN: Sweetheart, they just had a full chapter of sexual tension between me and Jezzie so hot that my [BLEEP] is still sore. They can wait a bit longer for me to get into stalker mode on Virginia. They HAVEN'T seen how I possess anyone yet. They want to.
ME: No they don't.
DAUN: Yes they do.
ME: They want you and Virginia to hit it off already.
DAUN: La la la, I can't hear you...
Sigh.
Anyway, HOT progresses.
1 Comments:
well, damn. My characters never speak to me.
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